Monday, November 30, 2009

Evening Light

If you hear my voice in the evening light
Whispering to the darkened shadows
Don't mind it
I'll be staring off into the distance
Leaving unspoken words behind
'I'm broken and hurt and alone'
No hope shines through the stars
Glistening in the navy sky
When you hear my voice in the evening light


  1. This made my brain die a little. But not in a bad way. I don't know. It's hard to explain. I guess "die" isn't the best word. Maybe "spiral into infinity" is better... Just wow. Kizzie. You need to share your writing with the world. You're amazing.

  2. I am sharing it with the world. I just posted the link on Facebook asking for feedback.

    And "spiral into infinity"? XD